Thursday, September 27, 2012

Review of Flank Hawk at Pauline's Fantasy Reviews

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Below is the link to a review of Flank Hawk.

The story, characters, contents, and writing didn't really appeal to this reviewer, but that's what happens sometimes when a novel is put out there.

Here's the link if you're interested in what Pauline had to say:

Fantasy Review: 'Flank Hawk' by Terry W Ervin II
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6 comments:

  1. First, you are to be commended for your honesty and maturity in posting an unflattering review. Many authors lack that integrity and would bury such comments deep in some digital cellar. You, on the other hand, gave them feature on your blog. Tip of the hat to you, sir.

    Second...wow! I was stunned by that review; not by its content, rather by the reviewer's gender bias. She observed that the strengths of Flank Hawk are values she doesn't hold in high regard. I believe that to be a reflection of gender bias and it may explain why I loved the book so much while she did not.

    I found the fast action, intense combat and vivid scene descriptions enthralling, but she wanted more depth in relationships. As a man, I would have been bored to tears with the kinds of "relationship" interactions she found lacking. I can honestly say there was nothing in Flank Hawk that I would want changed, but then, it satisfied my emotional needs.

    After reading her conclusion, it dawned on me that all reviewers are, by basic human nature, biased in their representations. Pauline shows a strong feminine bias, i.e. wanting emotional interaction. Her lack of connection with the tactical realities of war or physical obstacles the main character overcame also illustrate her inability enjoy a classic male bias. I guess all reviews should be taken with a grain of Sault!

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    1. Thanks, Dean. Every novel isn't for everybody. I see where you're coming from and had not considered the review's contents in that manner. Pauline did ask if I wanted the review posted on Amazon, and I did request not as I felt it would be counter productive.

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  2. I've had this happen to me two or three times in the past couple of weeks, where I've seen a review of a book that I loved and wondered if the reviewer and I had even read the same book, because our experiences could not have been more different! I think that's why I don't often read reviews before I read a book. Anyway, I love the characters. They all feel very real to me. Especially Krish. I do think he is somewhat emotionally detached in his relationships. That's a part of who he is. Probably because he has such a big secret to hide. It would be really interesting to see how he handles falling in love. =)Anyhow, different people like different things and that's okay.

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    1. Yes, Angie, I see it happen, but the reviews I count on are from reviewers/readers I've found common ground with in the past.

      Your observations about Krish are pretty accurate. First, his hidden secret, and second, the continual loss of friends in combat--the mercenary life.

      If things work out in Soul Forge as planned, it may set Krish up for a bit of connection/romance.

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  3. Terry,

    As you know, I enjoyed Flank Hawk and Blood Sword as well. However, I found myself nodding at her review.

    I think you are quite strong writing action. The pace kept me turning the page.

    If you wanted a face paced, action heavy fantasy adventure, you achieved it, and I liked it. I felt the reviewer would have preferred more character development. Nothing wrong with that. I enjoy those types of stories as well.

    I admire as well that you post links to even negative reviews. I intend to do the same.

    Thanks.

    Brian

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    1. Posting it provides potential readers with a heads-up so that they don't spend their time and money on something they're not likely to enjoy.

      Thanks for taking the time to read comment, Brian.

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